Friday, 30 June 2017

My Role Model

Why my Mum is my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
Title - What you will be explaining
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

My Role Models
My role model is my Mum. My mum is a role model for me because she shows me the right way to do life. She is a woman of greatness and talent and one day I hope to grow up and be like her.
1st element
My mum works as hard as a busy bee. She works awfully hard just for me and my siblings. She always wakes up early to make sure she is ready before she wakes us up.Just so she can be on to it and help us when we need anything. When she gets paid she always checks if we need anything so she can purchase it. My mum consistently makes me feel welcome and comfortable in my own home. She gave me a cosy bed that gives me the rest I need. She brought our family a television and play station where we get to relax as we enjoy ourselves in the sitting room. She makes me food that I get to eat as I get my energy. I also get a room when my mum could’ve just said “the couch is all yours” but no, she offered to give me a room where I get to do my personal things.
2nd element
My Mum voluntarily works extra hours for free. She stays at work and works with no anger but love. She displays that we need to show integrity no matter what we do or where we are. We appreciate her love kindness and integrity because she has given us so many chances. No matter what she provides clothing for my siblings and I. Even if we have plenty of clothing she provides us with more than we need. She also does a lot of washing and takes our grubby clothes and does at least a load of washing each day.She also takes it to dry just so our washing can be as clean as pie. My mum  repeatedly feeds me and helps to keep me healthy. She non-stop askes me if she is hungry and always  makes sure I am clean.
Information 3rd element
My mum repeatedly feeds me and helps to keep me healthy. She non-stop asks me if I am hungry and always  makes sure I am clean. She always makes sure there is dinner, lunches and snacks for my siblings and I so that when we’re at home we don’t starve. She ensures that at school we are fed. When I am sick my Mum always takes me to the doctor and makes sure I am healthy. She always is up to date with my injections and makes sure that she is by my side the entire time.
These are the reasons why my mum is my role model. My mum is the person who raised me and built me to be who I am today. She is my role model because she is independent, hard working and strong. She is my light when all I can see is darkness. She is my Saviour when I need her.

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